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Old 02-05-09, 02:13 AM   #6
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V/ Big. Both Sucked BALLS. big, dude i KNOW you can do better.
whats going on wit you man, you've been droppin weak, u always
got fresh concepts..and just word your lines terribly..

FLY E, i gotta lot of work to do with you...1st of all you did like 8 bars, cuz that last one....wasn't just a punch lmao......2 bars thats it man...not 2 paragraphs full of little rhymes...MAKE PUNCHES. i tried to talk to you about this the other day, what happened to the structure u was using then..why go back to this paragraph shit.

ellevate...both of you...quick
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