lol @ picperf sucking after texting for years.

This bluff is far from irrisistable... lil picture bitch i'm like an underground ritual/
My finger is so mystical..... Homie imma scripture The big picture is you dead and we'll keep it habitual/
This shit was all kinds of wrong, it was way too stretched out which has the effect of making a line tend to be boring and lose steem. You also didn't really add a punch and just tried to put random weak multies around. Not a good way to start it off here.
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i'ze gonna blast this bitch away.. make his chest and a hole equals
but if boy be fly imma just reload and clip the wings off da desert eagles
king of the midwest? u more than frontin
his peeps nicknamed him fly cuz he's always buggin
Wow, Pic.. a weak gunplay punch? Your wording was atrociouse and you over all flow was off. I expected way more then this from you even in a 1-2-1 league man. You played out the bug/fly nameplay by using it twice and it showed that you had nothing better to put down. This hurts you a lot in a battle and lets you lose creativity in the eyes of the voters, that plus the wording and over all punch was weak.
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Act like you da hardest rapper on here well bitch imma bought to leave ya wit sores/
32-23 no wonder why you aint battle no more.. Were bored and ya floored Dumpin ya ass out a ford, bitch ya styles played you been sayin and swayin da same shit since 04/
omfg, this was the longest bar that I have ever read in my life.. WTF does dumping his ass out a ford have to do with anything in your verse??? Its retarded to toss shit out a random like this. You should work on shortening your punches to keep the attencion of the readers, the flow in your multies is garbage and off man, you should cut out like 80% of the words that you dont need to get your point across to make your shit atleast flow good .

My vote will go to Picture Perfect for having a more solid verse with a readable structure, please do me a favor and elevate though Pic, you probably haven't done it since that last time we battled or something but after all the battles you've had, people shouldn't be afraid to call a nigga like you a vet. Elevate my dude.

V/ Picture Perfect.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..