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Old 02-05-09, 11:30 AM   #14
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your well informed about my illness, without knowing the issue
and I'll let you know from the jump... that's going to kill you!
actually, I do see a slight connection between the line... 2nd line wordplay was dope, but the 1st line wasn't that harsh of a setup.

I dont listen to whipper snappers, go blow a fog horn bastard
it's like your k9 disappeared in your rhymes, all this 'dog gone' wackness
This was cool...again, good wordplay



this kids sex life is ghastly, he’s opted for jumpin old peoples bones
his penis is so pro’grammes it broadcasts in retirement homes
This was nice...setup was good and flowed from line 1 to line 2

& I consider ya mom my equal, coz we both got guerilla tactical thinking
I plan raids n’ ambushes, her hairy ass climbed the Empire State Building
tho this is a mom joke, its still a great punch... thought of KING KONG as I read this



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