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Old 02-05-09, 01:04 PM   #10
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Originally Posted by Wordz AhGod
Wow, Pic.. a weak gunplay punch? Your wording was atrociouse and you over all flow was off. I expected way more then this from you even in a 1-2-1 league man. You played out the bug/fly nameplay by using it twice and it showed that you had nothing better to put down. This hurts you a lot in a battle and lets you lose creativity in the eyes of the voters, that plus the wording and over all punch was weak.
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i used fly in two different ways in the two different bars. so i dont think i played it out. its just already played out, but i didn't care to take anymore time constructing good bars when the other dude didn't even have a clue what he was doing.
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