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Yeah, I agree with everything above.
There's way too much open space, and the piece as a whole would benefit from being smaller. Text looks really random as well, I don't think it fits. You should add more grays if you want to use that picture of cam'ron, everything will blend a little bit better.
Hope that helps
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