View Single Post
Old 02-12-09, 10:24 AM   #9
Civil.
What' it do?
 
Civil.'s Avatar
 
Posts: 1,979
From: Garden City
IP:

It's nothing new, perfectly describes you, a new style'll leave you hurting
seriously if your the Original-- there's clearly a demand for an updated version
Poorly worded, forced. Overall not really harsh


dude seriously, can you even drop a punch that's not horrible
like how you gonna flip The Original with the most played ass punch possible
^eh not really feelin this. didn't rhyme that great. kind of just blah

no wonder you never get pussy, i'll smack you coz I hurt gays
n' the only time you see 'tic in a box, is when he's filling out gay rights survey
Wording could have been better, concept wasn't bad though.


So what you think my shit played, I are who I is don't get it misunderstood
If I didn't drop Original... Its cause I actually planned on dropping good
I know you didnt ghostwrite this. This is the 3rd week in a row, you've dropped a nice nameplay and overall a descent punch. I thought this was a clever punch, a bit played. But nicely worded. Effective.


overall this was damn close. 1 against 1. in my opinion i just felt like caus's came off harder. Both of you guy's first bars were weak as fuck. But 2nd bar from caus was a bit stronger. better worded.
__________________
Let ME fiiiinnd ooout
Send a message via AIM to Civil. Send a message via MSN to Civil.