Lol I was gon use this beat. Couldn't get a hook down tho.

but yea, i don't know hook seems out of place with the chorus switch on the beat. Delivery wasnt right for it.

First verse, lyrics were nice. Flow was on and off. Some parts nice, others a little off. Delivery tho too monotone. I don't think that kind of delivery fits this beat.

Second verse, lyrics coo here, but in end you def had way too many words per lines cuz you were rushing shit. And it just came out bad.

Third verse was better than 2nd, but not as good as first.

overall wasn't too bad. Better than your past shit tho.

word

and who the fuck is that kevin homo?

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