Well i dont agree with starting a thread with the word "and" makes the written incomplete. I think alot of writers leave things too complete i like to raise the mind to its own thought on the particular situation. In this written i think theres two victims the man running and the person who gave reason why the mans running. When writting it i didnt feel it needed deep vocabulary to get the point across--read my other scripts and you'll see I often use intellect to make discriptive thoughts. I felt using a abstract monologue would fit this story/written perfectly.

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