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Old 02-17-09, 08:33 AM   #5
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the Words Ah God sound greek to me, I'm crushin this geek with blows
if u n Zeus play God...than Mt. Olympus must be part of the broadway show


.vs.


Who the fuck r u?
Hiding in my shadows but Im beating ur wak frame..
coz last time he crossed Wordz.. he ended up with THAT name.
My uppercuts = Jesus..Christ this kids is dope???
Please, I'll hit u with enough crosses..
..to put an end to ur corny religeouse jokes.



Overall, i guess this battle wasnt bad. By all means it wasn't good. but it was enjoyable. I thought both of you had gooood openers, but other than that ya verses
were just meh to me. Both need to work on wording alot. umm..lp you've got concepts man. i can see it in ya lines, you just got to work on your set ups continueing to follow through with ya ending bar. (like u did in ya opener) words, the one thing i can say about yours..is it seemed kind of choppy. work on ya structure just a bit, not too much. cuz it isn't too bad. but def, can use some work. other than that props to both u guys. u gave us a good pre tourney matchup. And that IS all this is, so i understand not droppin ya hardest. But again props

v. wordz
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