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Old 02-17-09, 10:50 PM   #11
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I give him props for trying tho. Watch, he’ll claim me one of his wack fans
I admit his verse is poetry in motion... when aimed at a trash can
(Not bad, creative.)
Till I saw you as 1-2-1 champ, I was never one to believe in jokes

I also never believed that love was blind.. then I saw your verses receiving votes
(Lol cool.)

Not bad, but some of your lines we're off in wording and missed.

Vs.

Adam

This Indian lacks any skill, you won't find any wit in his blows,
Just quit the dry punches and stick to dry cleaning my clothes.
(Lol, funny shit.)
I'm just wondering which SPuL is going to show up and write,
'Cause when LK isn't ghosting, he's Reckless, recycles and bites.
(Hits nicely, well executed.)

I'm voting for Adam, his punches seemed more direct.
Some funny shit in there too, so he gets my vote.

Vote - Adam
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