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Old 02-18-09, 10:08 AM   #8
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Your rhyme scheme im breakin' you seem like a Jafakin'
Megaz making' gay punch lines talented like Clay Aiken
very weak


You aint a gangster friend, quit your act n all the pretends, I saw right through you quick,
Cus hes the only gent that tried to go G, but this aint the reverse of that MTV show slick!!
stretched lines and weak also
Killaz doesn’t bust gats he throws toasters, trying to act like hes fuckin wild,
Iunno whats worse that wack ass punch line or the fact he KNOWs the homo poster child!!
weak again


Mega couldnt drop shit even if he was usin' preparation h....
Your style is so stale like it has a bad expiration date....
weak again



its like you guys are old school, just random disses we need to see wordplay and other sick writing techniques.


vote g for the better structure
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