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Old 02-18-09, 10:11 AM   #12
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wasn't really feeling anything, fly your still improving but you have to be able to tell the difference between fresh hard concepts and weak ones, just re-wording wil improve your writing a lot. JTR, you know what to do bu it wasn't coming out hard enough to turn heads, enough for the win but step it up next time.

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