Thread: Shawty Get Low
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Old 02-18-09, 01:09 PM   #3
Jay Rose
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mix the hook bettter, more lows, more layers. and your lacking swagger it seems like you dont feel what your sayin...not like you did on your heartbreak songs....make me believe that your seeing this freak and you really wunna fuck...dont just say it mean it...the sound isnt bad just unbelieveable, sorry
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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