okk...
Claimin you beat me? LOL... you got me fightin the laughs son
The phrase "you're as dumb as a post" must have been inspired by that one
not really liking this punch
I give him props for trying tho. Watch, he’ll claim me one of his wack fans
I admit his verse is poetry in motion... when aimed at a trash can
this was pretty funny
Adam’s style speaks for it’s self. To be blunt, he’s a queer...
...wherever he May March, and every other month of the year
this was a bit ehh
I’m a hustler, he’s a pheasant. Why’s this guy trying b?
I got the drive for the benz. He’s just here to drive mine for me
lol, funny shit
My name holds legendary status. His name’s in cahoots with bad crap
So while all my lines get a dam! All his lines get adam laughed at
lol, ok nameflip
Tried throwing his net weight around offline. It only led to bad ends
Leaving him stuck editing posts, cuz he couldn’t edit his life to add friends
OUCH! this was harsh
Till I saw you as 1-2-1 champ, I was never one to believe in jokes

I also never believed that love was blind.. then I saw your verses receiving votes
kinda bland concept, ehh punch
Unidentifiable. A NOBODY. Shit, this kid is a geek
On second thought, he WILL be somebody... else’s bitch next week
nah son, played and weak

Overall it was a good verse in places. You opened weak, had a couple of punches thrown in that were just weak, execution lacking. The mid section was strong, you strung together a few nice punches and had that one harsh reading haymaker. The closer was weaksauce. Good verse though for some parts.


VS.


Nobody digs SP, 'the kid'? I'll pick apart your childish ways,
When it comes to battlin' u, an L follows everything that you say.
this was weak, read more like a statement
Your style's girly and played, yet this gay boasts and he brags,
Dude, an Eclipse ain't cool, unless you're an Asian chick or a fag.
this was kinda ok
This Indian lacks any skill, you won't find any wit in his blows,
Just quit the dry punches and stick to dry cleaning my clothes.
lol, made me laugh
Damn SPuL, you're a hoe and your internet crews fucking whack too,
Yeah "Money Ain't Shit" when daddy pays for everything that you do.
as a generic punch its ok, as a personal its fake
I'm just wondering which SPuL is going to show up and write,
'Cause when LK isn't ghosting, he's Reckless, recycles and bites.
played concept, been flipped on him before
Don't even try to hide or deny it, dude this shit is your life,
Not only are your accomplishments sigged...
...............................but you have your own fucking site.
don't really work, he runs a site in his spare time that makes him money.. also, he hasn't really done anything on it for months, so how is it his life?
Bitch, I'm just writing for fun 'cause I'm a folk musician who busks,
See, you'll try and drop hard but you're just a rapper that sucks.
weak, not even a punch
And your sigs just a laugh, that's back when I didn't know facts, b
'Cause the only time people put their hands up for SPuL..
.............................................is when they're hailing a taxi.
same way as the dry cleaning, this was not funny like the other one though

Overall, too many punches fell because of poor wording. You had some statement type punches thrown in there. You attacked the job side twice, first with dry cleaning and then with the taxi which was a downer. Also, you had a couple of concepts that didn't hit because the this shit is your life didn't hit at all and the reckless shit was played. Also, the money ain't shit only worked as a generic punch and it wasn't that great. As a personal, it didn't work because his parents don't pay for his shit. He works at Macy's Corporate and pays for his own car and apartment.


Overall, SPuL had more hits. Adam had too many failed attempts.

v/ - SPuL

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