New Jack
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Words - You had some interesting concepts but didn't execute them well.
The wording killed the first punch, it could've been pretty dope. The second one was cool but wording hurt it too, an interesting concept though
Coke - Your first punch I didn't feel like it hit hard and was kind of a weak concept. The second punch didn't seem that fresh i've seen a bunch of stuff like that before so that was mehish.
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