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Old 02-20-09, 08:25 PM   #2
Paranoid
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shit i remember you, i dont really remember ya music though. anyway this is a pretty sick beat. you got a cool voice but ya delivery could be more polished in some spots but for the majority it sounds pretty smooth and it fits the beat well. lyrics is aight, kinda basic but it's cool. the flow was pretty smooth, doesnt really fall off at all. the second verse has way better lyrics though the delivery is up and down for me. the hook sounds pretty good im feelin it. nice track man

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