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Old 02-20-09, 08:26 PM   #13
bobericc_lyrics
text.even geico can do it
 
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From: boston
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Ur old dude, Cross' joints be hurtin.. but he'll show, we hope
so we can all see some of that fire...
... and the pile of ash after hes smoked
^not bad, maybe its just the wording..
Now we know Alpha's the king, and I bring the thunder, man
while you bring your own wack punches...
... that no one can understand..
^lol

vs

Says im old,,Yet u the 1 whos 50 n plays bowls,,is it just^or is ur memory missing?
Take up singing,,Alphabetized.Fuck the alphabet in a battle,,,What Counts Is hiting
^blah, statement
Sounds yung or isnt listnin,his Flows Not nice so santas Takin a dump in his chimny
Age diss weak..u sound 15..n"Those lines burnin me?"Son you aint even Singeing me
^very weak attempt at a flip

all I can say is thank civil for editing your post, sparing yourself from total embarrassment, elevate for real
v/Alpha