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Old 02-20-09, 08:36 PM   #12
bobericc_lyrics
text.even geico can do it
 
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Your rhyme scheme im breakin' you seem like a Jafakin'
Megaz making' gay punch lines talented like Clay Aiken
^ehhh, no
Mega couldnt drop shit even if he was usin' preparation h....
Your style is so stale like it has a bad expiration date....
^ could've hit a lot harsher..

vs

You aint a gangster friend, quit your act n all the pretends, I saw right through you quick,
Cus hes the only gent that tried to go G, but this aint the reverse of that MTV show slick!!
^decent concept, very stretched...
Killaz doesn’t bust gats he throws toasters, trying to act like hes fuckin wild,
Iunno whats worse that wack ass punch line or the fact he KNOWs the homo poster child!!
^no

both had a 2 very wack lines and 2 moderately wack lines
v/Gkilla