Raw emotions shown in this piece for sure...

..i'm presuming this piece is about 'your man' going out to war in Iraq...so no technical critique on this...

...but that is kind of unlucky in a way, only 2,000 troops sent form Australia, and your boyfriend is one of them...what is he? Normal infantry? SAS? or maybe some other special forces?...

Either way, i feel ya for sure...in my own little way...nicely done i felt...i.e. vented well...(!!)...and nice to see ya back too...

...respect...