Yeah I remember you tellin me about this one so I'll leave a little feed on it from the new parts.

Chorus with girl is a no. Girls whole part is a no. Not to be mean, but she's not cut out for a solo. Tell her not to do so many runs cause her voice isn't right for it. And her verse sounds much too empty.

Last verse not really liking it to be honest. I think you coulda done much better.