^^^what the frig?! At least make it a bit more constructive than that...

Anyway, this was quite simply one hell of a piece...

...but to use the word simply would be an insult to it....as it had a lot of depth and complexity to it...

...imagery was brilliant, the approach you took original and 'on the edge'...just getting in there, flowing with vocab used well, without necessarily any of it rhyming....

...i think once or twice it did seem a bit too loose...but nah, that doesn't matter much on here...the style 'allowed' that to an extent...and the essence of it all was just so apparent, really enabled the reader to get into it well...

...enough said, respect...