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Old 02-21-09, 08:44 PM   #13
LPMNDCTE
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You aint a gangster friend, quit your act n all the pretends, I saw right through you quick,
Cus hes the only gent that tried to go G, but this aint the reverse of that MTV show slick!!

This was a bit wordly, but still managed to connect. gOOD concept


Killaz doesn’t bust gats he throws toasters, trying to act like hes fuckin wild,
Iunno whats worse that wack ass punch line or the fact he KNOWs the homo poster child!!

This was wak... straight up...



Mega couldnt drop shit even if he was usin' preparation h....
Your style is so stale like it has a bad expiration date....

This was barely descent. Rhymed well, but the concept was not strong enough

Your rhyme scheme im breakin' you seem like a Jafakin'
Megaz making' gay punch lines talented like Clay Aiken

to many similies in this bar. try to limit it to one. other than that, this was a cool bar


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