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Old 02-21-09, 08:50 PM   #9
LPMNDCTE
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Being gay is genetic, so it's my cue to say it's a choice with this fool,
Caustic meets with balls and I ain't talking 'bout gene pool.

This was pretty descent here for an opener punch. Descent wordplay, but nothin special here.

When it comes to chicks, I'm strictly XXX, you just claim to beat them at will,
Bitch, you'll be my third win in a row ^, Caustic tac toe never took any skill.

This punch was ill. The 2nd line complemented the 1st line very well and was the best bar I seen this week in the 1-2-1 Punch forum. Great nameplay flip into wordplay. Setup was great and a good level of complexity.


Don't talk slick fool, your mouth'll get your bitch ass beat down
its not unusual to see you acting like a diva...n me like Chris brown


This was done better than the Chris Brown punch used against me last week on RB. Good concept development on this one.




that's a piss poor effort, your rhymes ain't shit, I couldn't find in an alley
So if that's the best he can do, y'all might as well just Adam to my Tally


not creative enough here. Remember, Adam has been battlin for a while under that name, so more versitality is required to make a direct connection off nameplay.


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