you need to cut the intro where the mic's rumbling around, that's the most annoying sound in the world. Get a stand, or invest in one if you're going to record I can hear that rumbling around the whole time, it sounds really annoying. Cut that our or get a stand. Anyways, lyrics were good, sounds like you're transitioning from being a text head to a emcee. Flow was decent, and the delivery was alright.

I'd say work on the quality issues, aka invest in a stand, put a beat on, and then work on adding overdubs and all that other good stuff.

Flow was cool, but I couldn't really judge it because anyone can flow without a beat. Lyrics were good for the diss.

I'd say you got some potential, I like your voice. So keep on keeping on.

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