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Old 02-23-09, 12:51 PM   #4
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First off I hate beats with the producers name in there haha

Is that Weezy? haha...dont wanna say that he doesnt have any emotion in that. That might be the kind of feel he's going for but I don't like it. Lyrically poop.

Chorus is pretty weak..it's supposed to be the catchy part of the song. I think the Sinima Beats part is more memorable.

Your verse is pretty dope. I like how you came in.


The chorus needs A LOT of work.
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