this one here really came down to who hit the topic more this week
It is supposed to be a club banger...so heres my breakdown


One way-overall you werent bad on the mic man, you sort of got a different
style with the way you record. but it doesnt sound bad. I think you had a good
rhyme scheme. Your imagery was good, i liked your overall word usage. The chorus/hook wasnt bad. I def. think that was the part that stood out. but overall
this really didnt approach me or hit me as a club banger. it just didnt hit hard enough


bob-same with you. you sound great on the mic man, you got a good voice for this
Your rhymes are dope as well. You put everything together well. I think you hit the topic, and had the right idea. Its just that sound, it didnt come as a club banger. It just wasnt banging. i wasn't feeling your chorus as much either.


v. one way. overall it was close, i jus think one ways chorus was a little bit more clubish than bob's. close though, hopefully this will get more votes.

good luck

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