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Old 03-21-03, 11:35 PM   #9
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yeah yo you kinda through me off with the beginnin' I was thinking "yo this shit don't rhymes..." but then I realize this was like the skit that helps build the concept of the verse... pretty good, it's rearly been done, or I've rearly seen it.. lol...
Well you know I liked the concept, the wordplay and rhymes were just right for it... the flow... I was feeling it more in the begining of the verse... then it sort of lost that rhythm it had built up at the start... still it was straight though... overall, a tight verse...

Peace
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