Defeat this chump easy, cam i'll leave ya head caved in...
coz ur wackness is horrifying you must be Wes Craven
(Nah)
Dont Speak or front, advice isnt free you cunt im being blunt
in saying try to contruct 1 decent punch
That doest use up a whole week from your month!!
(Eh, not really.)
Watch and learn as I box this nerd off my turf
leave this "penis limp" not because he's got no sperm
(Nah dude.)
He must work in a gym because he's definatley the kind
To workout busta the way that he's stretching rhymes...
(Forced.)
Invest in some time because I know your pretty worthless
well at least you admit, referring to your own "shitty verses"
(Nah not feelin this either.)
Leave this guy shafted, coz he likes guys and has had cocks
They got the combination to his ass like its his personal padlock!!
(Needed some rewording. To simple)
Internet forums maybe nerdy so it's quite clear your a geek
because online battling.....
is enough to keep this coke dealer off of the streets!!...
(OK.)


Your concepts arn't that bad, but your wording isn't that great and your delivery is weak, thus the punch doesn't hit very hard.

vs

I'm a mario, n i'm growing in size, he aint got a clue
Cuz i'm higher than fuck the way i'm eating this lil murshroom
(Could've been cooler with better wording.)
Watch the votes pour in, i aint gotta clame to be doper
Spitting graceful like a diplomat, when i say Cam's career's over
(Nah.)
Flip em like skate decks, ya shits old concepts and garbage text
Even ya know's perfectly stating the truth that Cam's A rec
(Nah.)
Nerdy n white, watch what this gay guy really means to say
'Jared gave me a 5 dollar footlong', but he aint talkin Subway
(Weak.)



Well, basically.. the best bar I saw in this whole thing was from Coke Dealer in his first punch, but even that was the greatest.

Of course, on the other hand, you only dropped 8 lines and ur opponent 14 but thats cool too.

No hate.

Vote - Coke Dealer