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Old 02-27-09, 05:30 PM   #12
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use it or lose it, ya mind gone off this new shit...
I'm "hittin this Square" juss to STOP his music!!
(Seen this before.)
not to be fucked with, so dont take me softly
He a MARK, just "dot eyes" "N CROSS T"
(Doesn't really hit hard in my opinion.)

vs

Man, yo far in the closet, trapped in like a snoglobe,
cause judgin by your sig i can tell your a ho-mo....
(Kinda forced, weird delivery.)
..well like an addict 'a crack, you blow,sno. You shouldnta showed
'Winners clear, the caps been snapped, so quit playin in snow and go learn how ta rap..
(Weird delivery.. the concept's there though.)

^ your concepts arnt bad but there setup and delivery is very bad.


This wasn't a good battle at all...
I'm gonna say NTT for better concepts but not by much.