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 Coke can try and hit me, but I bet I'll bust him and he chokes,'Cause I've always Won-21, Dealer just gives BJ's out for votes.
 ok wording is iffy
 
 After this, i'll make em Mad, Eh. We know Canada is just 'backwards'
 N the direction of your bars so 'bull'shit, you just becomin a Cow Ward
 wording was bad, concept was ok
 Real dopeness, look at the siggy you always second place to them
 Must be a queer, the way he always claming he the Champ in Men
 wasn't feeling it
 
 
 You're trying to hard to be clever, no girls are gonna dig that sound,
 'Cause the only chicks that swallow Coke usually weigh 300 pounds.
 ok again but could have been stronger
 
 
 
 pretty week battle gunna say ADAM for the first line, both you need to worko on wording for more effect
 
				__________________When I be selling grams I’m slinging bombs like Uncle Sam Myspace
It's ok to make money, Legit or illegal...
 But it's treason when you turn your back on your people.
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