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Old 02-28-09, 09:32 AM   #8
one way
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Coke can try and hit me, but I bet I'll bust him and he chokes,
'Cause I've always Won-21, Dealer just gives BJ's out for votes.
ok wording is iffy

After this, i'll make em Mad, Eh. We know Canada is just 'backwards'
N the direction of your bars so 'bull'shit, you just becomin a Cow Ward
wording was bad, concept was ok
Real dopeness, look at the siggy you always second place to them
Must be a queer, the way he always claming he the Champ in Men
wasn't feeling it


You're trying to hard to be clever, no girls are gonna dig that sound,
'Cause the only chicks that swallow Coke usually weigh 300 pounds.
ok again but could have been stronger



pretty week battle gunna say ADAM for the first line, both you need to worko on wording for more effect
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