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Old 03-01-09, 08:06 PM   #10
SnoCap
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Alpha


The sites kind of inactive, so consider me a new host
Cuz I'll leave JTR so dead..
.. even the forum will seem flooded with posts
wasnt feelin this.
You don't know me? I'm Kryptic dude, so drop ya pen
Cuz i'll leave ya with notions.. and you'll NEVER walk again
I liked this one, good wordplay
Civil fucked up on matchups, i'm stuck slappin a con
Cuz when I optical you everyone will -c- where you belong
decent
You want my shit, but ya can't have it bitch respect my phonics
Because my dictions JTR..
... and any other fag who tries hoppin on it
wordplay was okay, but not really too fond of the gay jokes...
RV's ya life, shit's gonna get fucked up when ya lose..
I hope ya survive the jump...
... but thats a big fall from ya roof
um, na.


JTR


Bitch why start shit? Call me a faggot but you're gettin ripped regardless
Cuz the only time Alphabet gave anyone trouble was in Kindergarden
Good bar, i liked this one, good set up nice execution.
I spit good rap, your wordplay is shit and you should be shook man
With Pun's that are so fucking wack they make Terror Squad look bad
na aint feeling it. terror squad actually makes money... ya'll dont..
My wordplay's ill; I connect with homophones when I say phat rhymes
You only connect with homophones when you call gay chat lines
No, gay jokes are wack and played
Alpha aint iller he a groupie, and his skills aren't with the cuties
I know what you did last summer
...chased screaming girls but never got em like the killer from the movie
wasnt feeling it... left more to be desired.
Only girl you've ever gotten is a WHORE, and that hoe isn't pricey
But wait, cuz talk is cheap.... well then again, so is ya wifey
no, not good at all... do you even know if he has a girl? and even if he does have a girl. this doesn't hit hard.


eh, decent battle i guess... I thought a lot of the concepts were pretty much played, i think JTR had the best punchline but overall Alpha came with the better verse and more interesting lyrics. Seemed like JTR had lots of fillers and was pretty much all over the place. JTR went from alpha chasing screaming girls and not getting them too... alpha having a wifey and shes worth nothing... i guess work on consistency JTR and you'd have this.

vote:Alpha
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