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IP:
Both verses were all right. I figured I would like Spit's better, but the beauty's skin deep.
Spit:
I didn't feel punches, it took a lot of space but didn't bring sufficient content.
Good Lines:
I must state one very simple and cunning correction//
that scarfacekapone have never pleased a women with his erection//
they just come to me for tha inner pussie inspection//
But, don't tell me about deadly verbal injections and infections more than once. And your ending was extremely weak. Don't talk about fucking ugly broads in a diss... that's ridiculous.
As stated by your opponent, no less, you do have great flow. You need to up your battle-specific skills. Try to find a personal, give harder punches, and not ones that can be generalized hopefully.
Kapone:
Punches hit harder. You alluded to HIS vocab, but you better check your own house. Vocab isn't the be all, end all. But don't point it out if you're not solid. Your flow was NOT near Spit's. I thought the whole second half of your verse was solid. You started out a touch too conversational, that's kind of a waste in text, I think. But it was a fairly consistent verse, it got at him like a battle verse should, where Spit's was more of an exhibit of talent. Just check the closes, you got him...
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This wasn't WACK for a newbie battle, but there's work to be done. Two different styles for sure! I'll check you out later.
Peace.
Unofficial Vote = ScarFaceKapone
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