alright, i'd say JTR won


but, i'm not gonna break down a bar to bar vote, or a line to line vote

i will say this

One Way, isntead of doing

blha blha blha blah a
blah blah blah blha a

switch that shit up, hit some mutli's, get some real feeling in the peice

make ya shit way doper. thats my thought, take it or leave it

JTR, i can see the way you were going with your rhymes, the only thing i wasn't feeling...although you were describing great, you were also foricngin things to rhyme. There was many instances that you could have no put something in, but you did, only becuse the last words rhymned in the sentence. That almost took away from the meaning of what your saying, in my eyes

but overal, JTR took this battle.

both of ya'll i talk too, so you know i aint hate voting or nothing...much love to see a good poetry battle

but...

vote: JTR

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