..A New Breed of Femcee..
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IP:
This had a good concept, I liked the title..It's what got me in the thread...You could have added a little more imagery or vocab but the emotion was still strong. I didn't really like the way you ended it tho, seemed kind of a humorous finish to a serious piece. Iono. Good job tho, i liked it for the most part.
Stay up.
Peace
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