got money under her belt, but that aint the only type of green
as hopeless as can be, my onslaughts too much to stomach
^lol, this wasn't bad. Thought it was funny, not really harsh though

& now ya think ya Pimped Carlas, come on dude, your not that rich
last time she went back to C.A.L.I., is cuz I dumped the bitch
^cool concept, i think you fucked up on the wording though.



.vs



Its funny because i ain't seen this kid in months
With his 'diabetic' drink stand style...void of a punch!!
Uh this is the only thing that wasnt wack...it was just blah. so i quoted it


weak battle. didnt like either of your verses. LP you got so much potential
man. I can see it every time i read ya shit. You got original concepts dog..
but you GOT to work on wording. and making it HIT.

v. lp

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