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Wow, Monkey i might have to boot you right now.
You can not be writing your lines like that. Fix your structure
bud. no ones going to understand or want to even read what
you have to say. Shorten ya lines up in ya finish, and lengthen
up your set up. Read into other battles, for examples of what
i'm saying...or look at E.C's bars. See how they are written?
Anyway, EC i liked ya 1st i guess...wasnt feeling the 2nd at all. kind of played.
v/ec
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