your mic presence sounds like your scared.you need to be more comfortable on the mic.voice and flow are similar to soljah boy which is certainly not good.flow falls off on certain places because you forced words in where they couldnt go.lyrics are decent.concept is used a million times.hook is o.k.quality is good for that mic you have.emotional aspect hurts you.you dont make me believe you.you dont put anything into.try memorizing your shit better.maybe you sound unbeilievable because you dont really have a porche or none of that shit you said.i hate how you sound like souljah boy...................

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