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Old 03-05-09, 06:22 AM   #12
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One Way- loved your way of words man. your content was silly sick man. you had a nice touch this na dyou held it together with some great flow. nice way to keep me straight about you doing your thing nah mean. i thought you would lack but after reading this i see wrongfully homie and i take back my personal thought homie... anyways nice drop and i aint saying negativity nah mean... only positiveness.

JTR- anyways you dropped fully to your potential and this is one of the verse i love to read man. i loved how you came about your contents in this and your voice in this was strong dude. your flow man was on point ot me and held nicely with your word choice and rhyme scheme man. nice shit dude


overall i love writtens that can touch me beyond interest more like writtens that influence and JTR got my vote
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