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Old 03-05-09, 01:11 PM   #14
bobericc_lyrics
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dope matchup

oneway- yeh i liked the views on what you was spitting. shit was deep, the lines really aren't anything without the faces behind them, I think you hit your message on point. flow was cool. not an extra rhymescheme but I see where you fit in the multis. I really liked the line where you said 'if your words are heard, the face behind the lines is you' a really nice little drop of insight, good stuff.

JTR- so a rebuttle? lol i think you dropped pretty dope too man, I was able to follow along the whole time without a pause or anything, using em as an example was unneeded though, maybe an extra touch. I see what your saying too, you cant take the lines someone spits as a direct reflection of who they are. and that some of the underground rap that is tarnished with subpsycho lyrics shouldn't be the result of wrongs being done by people who listen to the music.

damn, its hard coming to a decision between both these verses...
v/JTR
but props to one for starting the inspiration up
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