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Old 03-05-09, 01:28 PM   #7
MurDaH187
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who's going to get killed?...
....(you dun fucked up).....
lol good intro got me amp for some raw shit...

I'm stopping your mental, drop full potential, I'm fucking insisting
my punches are hitting.. but you without 'me' is nothing but Misis..
decent start....

sunning a bitch when muscle head thinks his bars are polished off..
this dumb hater gets the punch breakers like mortal kombat blocks!
good, but choppy flow..

feeding these lines of short spars, this student aint seeing me
mims your not smart, I seen your report card... it said Deedede..
nah...

rapping secretly, since 04 you've built some rep on the internet
how he's got half the jump on his dick, and aint even win one yet
so true... good...

you little bitch! so I went to the hall of names and it isn't right
nick called your originality aggressive..explaining that you didn't bite!
would of hit alot better if worded better... but still decent...


Quote:
Originally Posted by Mimesis
I haven't done this shit in 3 years but I'm still a beast.



your an animal, I can't understand it though, your seeming fake
a lonely geek, the only beast in hibernation 12 seasons straight
good.

spitting heated flames, battling vets, but your verse played bitch
whole life is irony, like I smack you to death with a first aid kit
haha funny...

the worst fakeness, fuck your ego, your bars are booty bastard
check your confidence, and know the meaning of over-enthusiastic
didnt flow right with the set up... but i feel what u saying...

truly ass kid... so fuck 80-0, and concepts from generic bitches
your best battle's are crazy sets of gimmicks like the text Olympics
decent..

back to this senseless killing, you prewrite the same old clout
I can read you like a book... rip out your spine and pages fall out!
nice...

some good punches, some just didnt hit as hard due to ur set up bars,
flow was good, even thou u had like a bar or 2 that could of been worded a bit better to flow better.
concept's was good...
good drop fam 8/10



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Who the fuck is this kid?

I'm 80-0 -- not including wins in leagues and tournaments. You're 1-0.

I wrote verses 3 years ago that your best verse couldn't beat now.

Get the fuck out of my face.
*decent intro got me feeling like u might drop some heat...*

I took a break for a long time, but the shit just doesn't seem to feel fair
So I'll take another one to your neck. .
. .and you can sit the next few plays out in a wheelchair
the set up bar didnt make sense to me * i'll take another one to ur neck??*
need better wording...

The apple doesn't fall from the tree -- I know who you're around so fuck it
We're only amazed by Bob, Eric when your faggot dads make out in public
HA! good nameplay...

That shit is disgusting -- you're a lame bitch, and I'ma step to this trash
Your whole style's underhanded, so it's obvious I got a leg up in this match
NAH weak...

I'm like Lebron James in the lane -- dudes just keep paying me to stroll in
But no one takes charges from lyrics. .
. .we'd rather let him keep slam dunking his bullshit
good set up and punch..

And you're hideous too -- I'm hot, but you could make it snow in summer
So many moles on his body they used his picture to define Avogadro's number
WHAT!?! nah...

That's a chemistry joke cause I'm chemically dope -- just smashin' dudes
I'll make you bail out this tourney so fast GM will come chasing after you
decent but not hard hiting..

As soon as I checked in came 200 views, dog, this nerd is just hopeless
My comeback has generated more buzz than every verse that you've posted
decent...

And that's pathetic, so take the L cause you don't belong in the top spot
You just got your ass kicked to the jump, and we ain't competing in hop scotch

decent...

Fuck outta here, faggot.
^^ good ending lol...

punches was good, some didnt make sense and some was jabs no knock out blows...
flow: good, some area could of use better wording...
concept: decent 8/10


after re-reading both verse i have it barberic wining this slightly,
good battle drop from both much respect to ya and good luck...
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