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Old 03-05-09, 07:24 PM   #7
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Why even go 16 dude, cut ya verses down they wack as fuck
Cuz as soon as I saw 16 I was shorten of them would suck
^Ha, niiice. Son, dope shit
Final I MADE you dog, and ya NOT smart ya just bad, hoe
but your deffenetly bright...
...since ya spent ya career in my shadow
^this was ok



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really though, alpha you're fat. i got you're girl in my rig
& me and her made clips with enough X's to even fit YOU too big
^this was aight
i'm nice with my hands man, so i'll make it more then jus rap
and Shift you're bone structure enough to turn your whole verse into caps
^meh.



ok, this battle was ok. Alpha you came consistent, your whole verse had
alot of attempts. Good wordplay, that fuckin sure/ten shorten line was fucking dope dog. Goood shit,

final, your verse had some attempts. And i can tell you still got ya cleverness
but in this battle. you had alot of statements man, you got to re word ya punches a bit more. Cuz they arent hitting. Your just saying this and that, not actually throwing something out. na sayen? be more direct


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