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Old 03-05-09, 10:27 PM   #9
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Want money? Dear To Sue Me?, trust imma Beast With The Scripts cuz im 'Incresing Ya Flips, yea im'a SCARY NEWBIE

Who isnt 'Fixing To Fight Fair' cuz MurDah 'Mixed in hes Night-Mare' like Jason SCARY MOVIES
your lines are like bars themselves.....really stretched punch was pretty weak to


Stop 'Fronting About Ya Hype' cuz your 'Runing Outta Life' like DEAD BATTIERS!!

Trust i make Bread Vanish, Ease, so if ya 'Cruising Wait' cuz i'll have ya 'Losing Weight' like droping DEAD CALORIES
again witht he structure....and again a weak punch




other dudes was weak also but he atleast had flow and structure, even though you could cut your lines down a bit they would be better....
but vote lyrical
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