It's overious that this kid goes unnoticed like hidden dirt under the dresser
Either your weak as fuck or you hold back on punches more than pro wrestlers
cool decent, i dont see anything wrong with this.

Want money? Dear To Sue Me?, trust imma Beast With The Scripts cuz im 'Incresing Ya Flips, yea im'a SCARY NEWBIE

Who isnt 'Fixing To Fight Fair' cuz MurDah 'Mixed in hes Night-Mare' like Jason SCARY MOVIES



Stop 'Fronting About Ya Hype' cuz your 'Runing Outta Life' like DEAD BATTIERS!!

Trust i make Bread Vanish, Ease, so if ya 'Cruising Wait' cuz i'll have ya 'Losing Weight' like droping DEAD CALORIES!!
eh, first line was weak, the second was weak too but had a lot more potential then the first and you coulda came wit better wording and a better structure. I think you need to focus on that, make sure your punches hit hard, you got potential. And in a 2 bar battle, dont sacrafice a line, come hard everytime.


Every thread you posts is about "PORN" you must love to see a guys nuts
But I guess it's safe to say that almost everything in your posts "SUCKS
ehh basic, really basic

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