It's overious that this kid goes unnoticed like hidden dirt under the dresser
Either your weak as fuck or you hold back on punches more than pro wrestlers
^^pretty simple^^
Every thread you posts is about "PORN" you must love to see a guys nuts
But I guess it's safe to say that almost everything in your posts "SUCKS"
^^wasn't feeling^^

vs

Want money? Dear To Sue Me?, trust imma Beast With The Scripts cuz im 'Incresing Ya Flips, yea im'a SCARY NEWBIE
Who isnt 'Fixing To Fight Fair' cuz MurDah 'Mixed in hes Night-Mare' like Jason SCARY MOVIES
^^liked the multis, wasn't feeling the punch^^
Stop 'Fronting About Ya Hype' cuz your 'Runing Outta Life' like DEAD BATTIERS!!
Trust i make Bread Vanish, Ease, so if ya 'Cruising Wait' cuz i'll have ya 'Losing Weight' like droping DEAD CALORIES!!
^^again wasn't effective^^

I'm not gunna get on murda about the structure, but more on the directness of your punches, murda shows potential, especially with rhymeschemes. need to trim them bars a little, and throw harder hitting connections.

v/Lyrical