I'm stopping your mental, drop full potential, I'm fucking insisting
my punches are hitting.. but you without 'me' is nothing but Misis..
hmm don't think I ever seen something like this. cool stuff
sunning a bitch when muscle head thinks his bars are polished off..
this dumb hater gets the punch breakers like mortal kombat blocks!
no.. this didn't work at all
feeding these lines of short spars, this student aint seeing me
mims your not smart, I seen your report card... it said Deedede..
wtf? no
rapping secretly, since 04 you've built some rep on the internet
how he's got half the jump on his dick, and aint even win one yet
Too statementish. Not harsh at all
you little bitch! so I went to the hall of names and it isn't right
nick called your originality aggressive..explaining that you didn't bite!
Ok, using links in punches is played out. And second, the punch isn't even that hard hitting. ehh


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Originally Posted by Mimesis
I haven't done this shit in 3 years but I'm still a beast.


your an animal, I can't understand it though, your seeming fake
a lonely geek, the only beast in hibernation 12 seasons straight
ehh doesn't work
spitting heated flames, battling vets, but your verse played bitch
whole life is irony, like I smack you to death with a first aid kit
ehh
the worst fakeness, fuck your ego, your bars are booty bastard
check your confidence, and know the meaning of over-enthusiastic
not harsh
truly ass kid... so fuck 80-0, and concepts from generic bitches
your best battle's are crazy sets of gimmicks like the text Olympics
ok
back to this senseless killing, you prewrite the same old clout
I can read you like a book... rip out your spine and pages fall out!
kinda cool

Overall, started off with some creativity but really just fell off. Nothing too great here. Some lines were just way too statementish and could have been made a lot harder.

mimesis
I took a break for a long time, but the shit just doesn't seem to feel fair
So I'll take another one to your neck. .
. .and you can sit the next few plays out in a wheelchair
set up had me thinking you coming with something tight. But punch really failed to hit hard
The apple doesn't fall from the tree -- I know who you're around so fuck it
We're only amazed by Bob, Eric when your faggot dads make out in public
ehh I see what you trying but it was worded too sloppily
That shit is disgusting -- you're a lame bitch, and I'ma step to this trash
Your whole style's underhanded, so it's obvious I got a leg up in this match
played sonnnn. lol playeddd
I'm like Lebron James in the lane -- dudes just keep paying me to stroll in
But no one takes charges from lyrics. .
. .we'd rather let him keep slam dunking his bullshit
ok
And you're hideous too -- I'm hot, but you could make it snow in summer
So many moles on his body they used his picture to define Avogadro's number
ok
That's a chemistry joke cause I'm chemically dope -- just smashin' dudes
I'll make you bail out this tourney so fast GM will come chasing after you
coo
As soon as I checked in came 200 views, dog, this nerd is just hopeless
My comeback has generated more buzz than every verse that you've posted
haha nice swagger
And that's pathetic, so take the L cause you don't belong in the top spot
You just got your ass kicked to the jump, and we ain't competing in hop scotch
ehh

Overall, this verse was mediocre to your standards. Seems like you still shaking off the rust. You got your wording down, just need to make punches hit a little harsher. Not bad tho.

Overall, wasn't really mch in this battle. But Mim really attempted more creativity with his lines and his punches were worded a lot better. So he gets this fairly easy.

v/Mim

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