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Originally Posted by Implicit
First off...I think youre supposed to post in the tryout thread. But I'll leave feed anyway.
I like the beat. Kinda lame..but ehh.
verses - turn your adlibs down. a lot lower. lyrically it's actually not bad...one of the more lyrical commerical songs. kinda luda-esque with things actually making sense instead of a bunch of stupid lines thrown together. i think with the right rapper (not you) it'd be cool.
again the adlibs are too loud. you kinda remind me of the cool kids with the rhyme scheme. some pretty decent stuff in there. you need to get more comfortable on the mic. actually it might work if you just learn to mix your vocals.
this is definitely an insult but you sound like that cat that raps the song "give me a kick drum and a hi hat..." and somethin else. you sound like him. not a BAD song, but kinda boring.
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fasho, good point I do need to lower the adlibs and learn how to mix my vocals or get someone do it for me. Well thanks for the compliments on the rhyme scheme and lyrical content, Im glad to know I got that part down. I'll keep working on my pressence, but with my quality it's hard. I'll be gettin new equipment eventually though, i'm just starting off.
I find it funny how you said "i like the beat" and then "kinda lame" ahahaha but yea, I semi did this as a joke thing, it was completely for fun cuz I normally never hop on these types of beats or do this type of style haha, wanted to expirement and try something new