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Old 03-06-09, 03:17 PM   #6
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Mega vs You? No need to warn me Civils handing out money to boast n ill tourney,
While this pussys so scared he’s handing out money to protect himself from me.


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nothing.


mega once again you showed alot of potential. Your concepts are definately original, we can all see that. you just got to work on re wording them effectively. Fly, dude i dont know what to tell you dog. EVERY single one of your bars was a statement. You didnt have anything that connected. You got to make it into a punch man, you cant just say shit about your opponent...and think thats gon get you a win. You got to make punches man...direct personals....work on wordplay.


v/mega
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