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Old 03-22-03, 12:25 PM   #10
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this battle... was pretty mediocre... neither had hard punches... Knight had more... hum...

Deception... nice verse for a beginner... needs some work... but you're off to a good start...


KnightShade... same... but here's an idea... NEVER... EVER... explain punches or wordplay... you can't do it on stage... don't do it here... makes you look like a herb... *shakes head* besides that... better job on the punches...


vote: Shade...
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