too bad that your shit was no showed against

hopefully Vision can get back into this, cuz dude can def. drop dope poetry.

but

i enjoyed your peice man, i just wished that your detail to what it is that you were going for, like i got your overal message, but the detail's of how you are going about it, could have been done much much better

it felt like alot of your bars were stretched in order to get that extra rhyme in, and sometimes saying nothing is better than saying something

i liekd the structure of your verus, but the lyrical structure was the thing that i didn't like, felt pretty easy to go with

just my 2 cents

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