hmm

I'm truly empowered, because this tunnel I'm in has an end
So with euphoria I tred, knowing I'm meeting friends
Thoughts bend with these conceptions of reality my senses can feel
cuz my perception ain't defective, my mind's consensus is real
Depends on ya deal, and how you turn from livid and reform
& theres no time to grow frigid....
... when the norm is transformed to warm
Miracles performed, as you enter into a new conscience
That science will inform that you've conformed to some nonesence



those were my favorite lines from Alpha


Vivid Scenes, committed at heart, but feels like no one is forgiven me.
My tolerance for everything that hurts, is caused by living dreams
And exquisitely everything I’ve done has been hidden beneath,
...The thought that everything that’s been given to me can be taken astray
Seriously Lord, The two people I loved. You've Taken Away.
My mind is stuck, how can I escape that day, you took both my parents
It couldn't have been worse timing, my dad had finally proposed marriage
Now I’m living in a foster home. And all the love and fears combined
Because No one has any idea what that kind of loss, does to a fierce mind.


that was my favorite from Civil


here's how i feel about this battle

Alpha: He came with something very direct, his lyrical content was much better than Civil. He knows how to write poetry.

but, after reading about of them, i felt more emotion, and better story told by Civil

Civil's story was detialed enough, read smoothly, and also directed the emtional content it needed to make in order to win this match

i really liked Civil's, and i also enjoyed Alpha's

so props to both

but my vote: Civil

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